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Soulless and burning
a dark hole tears asunder
my feelings and thoughts
I fought this long and hard
just to be torn in two
what is worth it?
if nothing applies?
and no logic is given?
no harness to stay on top of things
Here is something else as well
I fell down a well headfirst
and broke my legs
and my arms
but my mind was intact
an evil festering
an evil devouring
all that made me whole
all that made me me.
A nightmare
in the mirror of humanity
@kimsguardian
@Idol Killer
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a dark hole tears asunder
my feelings and thoughts
I fought this long and hard
just to be torn in two
what is worth it?
if nothing applies?
and no logic is given?
no harness to stay on top of things
Here is something else as well
I fell down a well headfirst
and broke my legs
and my arms
but my mind was intact
an evil festering
an evil devouring
all that made me whole
all that made me me.
A nightmare
in the mirror of humanity
@kimsguardian
@Idol Killer
@Vampire
@UMJI MOODS
@Ackerman
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this is such a deep poem. fabulous!
as expected from our user of the month
as expected from our user of the month
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Sending happy mews your way =^o^=this is such a deep poem. fabulous!
as expected from our user of the month
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Wow. Very strong verbal imagery.
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Thanks for the feedback and visiting <3