I circled around this for a long time and what I came up with is so stupid, I love it.
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I barely submitted in time, iytr. The ending was rushed 
Woop missed something I needed to edit. Oh well. Good thing it's so dumb.
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sjjsjsjsj why are there only 4 submissions?
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The other stories are only avaible after buying vip subscription
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Mine got in right, Akidoki? 
People could only think of R-rated needle elf fanfic.
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I'm pretty sure I submitted in time
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Round 1 Submissions are below
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Only say the number of the score. So if you want to give 3 points then write 3.
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Submission 1
"“It’s so disgusting here! How much perfume did you use?” Completely undazed Stannie hid in her friend’s bag. It was a terrible idea to transform herself into a cat. Chomi's potion worked wonders with a little bit of help of Coco's spell. She became much more sensitive to smells… and energies around her. Her fur standing out in spikes. Voices inside her warning they shouldn’t be doing this.
Her black-colored tail slightly protrudes outside, pushing herself upwards on her little toes to inhale a refreshing breath from outside. Wait, did she just spot a needle from the corners of her eyes?
Here in the bank?
Nara stops her in her steps abruptly. Her lips curved upwards into a tiny smile, her wavy orange-colored hair hiding a secret behind her shoulder. A hand subtly covering her bag.
An elf who worked behind the counter doesn’t even tilt their eyes upwards.
The girl clears her throat—and then again, “Can I have your attention?”
Dark eyes meet the blue ones. And soft-spoken Nara begins, “I would like to check in my bank account.""
But the bank teller appeared to be completely uninterested, even unenthusiastic, ""And who you might be?""
""Akidoki."""
Submission 2
It was a peaceful afternoon in the Elf's village. Elves were ending their daily duties and preparing to go home after a long day of work, but suddenly villagers could feel a stronger wind in their hair. It quickly started picking up the pace and before long it there was a strong gale dancing around. Scared elves run indoors to hide, but as they were entering the huts they could smell a disgusting stench coming from behind them - when they looked through the windows outside they noticed a figure in the strong wind. They weren't able to tell how exactly it looked like, because all the stuff wind picked up from te ground, but it was massive. Big and tall and looked like it was holding a giant needle. After standing in place for so long it suddenly jumped and landed right next to the bank. It hammered the needle like object into the roof and sliced the building in half by moving it. All the village's gold fell out of the now ruined bank and the creature quickly picked it all up and run off into the distance - taking the treasure and wind with it.
Submission 3
"“I look disgusting,” she thought to herself as she caught sight of her reflection in the mirrored glass of the door.
She sighed and looked down as she continued waiting her turn in line for the bank. She tapped her fingers against her wallet when she felt a sharp sting. She pulled her finger up, a drop of blood oozing out.
“Gotcha.”
Next to her, somehow without her noticing, was a man dressed like an elf. Or at least she thought it was an elf. He had prosthetic ear tips on and a cheap wig that gave him hair like what she assumed was supposed to be Legolas’s. He held up a needle to his grin.
“Who… what the hell?”
“Now you’re mine, forever!” he yelled.
She looked around to see if anyone would try to intervene, but no one was willing to forgo their place in line so they all casually looked away. She became flustered as he grinned further.
“I have claimed your blood as my own, and now you shall be my eternal paramour! For I am the needle elf!” he declared, screaming once more.
She became flustered, “This is a bank.”
He began cackling wildly and stood just as a security guard rushed in to tackle him. The elf man whimpered as he was dragged out.
“This is a bank, Jesus,” she whispered.
Submission 4
"Once upon a time,
There lived a vain elf who was obsessed with their appearance and always looking perfect. One day, the elf saw an advertisement for a new brand of hair dye that was said to be infused with unicorn hair, giving the dye magical properties that would keep your hair shiny and luxurious for years. Determined to have this dye, the elf decided to take a trip to the bank to withdraw some money, as the dye was quite expensive, priced at a whopping three-thousand dollars. While on their way to the bank, the elf was stopped in their tracks by a beggar, who latched onto their shirt and pleaded for spare change.
Scoffing, the elf turned their nose up haughtily at the beggar and declared, ""Filthy peasant, keep your disgusting hands off of me. I have no time nor money for lowlifes like you. Simply gazing upon your hideous form brings me pain.""
Angered at their cruel words, the beggar stood up and removed their cloak, revealing their true form. They were in fact a powerful wizard, and this had been a test of character for the elf, which they failed. Pulling out a needle filled with a potion, the wizard plunged it into the elf into a pig,
And from that day forward, the elf was cursed to live as a hideous pig.
The end"
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Submission 1
"“It’s so disgusting here! How much perfume did you use?” Completely undazed Stannie hid in her friend’s bag. It was a terrible idea to transform herself into a cat. Chomi's potion worked wonders with a little bit of help of Coco's spell. She became much more sensitive to smells… and energies around her. Her fur standing out in spikes. Voices inside her warning they shouldn’t be doing this.
Her black-colored tail slightly protrudes outside, pushing herself upwards on her little toes to inhale a refreshing breath from outside. Wait, did she just spot a needle from the corners of her eyes?
Here in the bank?
Nara stops her in her steps abruptly. Her lips curved upwards into a tiny smile, her wavy orange-colored hair hiding a secret behind her shoulder. A hand subtly covering her bag.
An elf who worked behind the counter doesn’t even tilt their eyes upwards.
The girl clears her throat—and then again, “Can I have your attention?”
Dark eyes meet the blue ones. And soft-spoken Nara begins, “I would like to check in my bank account.""
But the bank teller appeared to be completely uninterested, even unenthusiastic, ""And who you might be?""
""Akidoki."""
Submission 2
It was a peaceful afternoon in the Elf's village. Elves were ending their daily duties and preparing to go home after a long day of work, but suddenly villagers could feel a stronger wind in their hair. It quickly started picking up the pace and before long it there was a strong gale dancing around. Scared elves run indoors to hide, but as they were entering the huts they could smell a disgusting stench coming from behind them - when they looked through the windows outside they noticed a figure in the strong wind. They weren't able to tell how exactly it looked like, because all the stuff wind picked up from te ground, but it was massive. Big and tall and looked like it was holding a giant needle. After standing in place for so long it suddenly jumped and landed right next to the bank. It hammered the needle like object into the roof and sliced the building in half by moving it. All the village's gold fell out of the now ruined bank and the creature quickly picked it all up and run off into the distance - taking the treasure and wind with it.
Submission 3
"“I look disgusting,” she thought to herself as she caught sight of her reflection in the mirrored glass of the door.
She sighed and looked down as she continued waiting her turn in line for the bank. She tapped her fingers against her wallet when she felt a sharp sting. She pulled her finger up, a drop of blood oozing out.
“Gotcha.”
Next to her, somehow without her noticing, was a man dressed like an elf. Or at least she thought it was an elf. He had prosthetic ear tips on and a cheap wig that gave him hair like what she assumed was supposed to be Legolas’s. He held up a needle to his grin.
“Who… what the hell?”
“Now you’re mine, forever!” he yelled.
She looked around to see if anyone would try to intervene, but no one was willing to forgo their place in line so they all casually looked away. She became flustered as he grinned further.
“I have claimed your blood as my own, and now you shall be my eternal paramour! For I am the needle elf!” he declared, screaming once more.
She became flustered, “This is a bank.”
He began cackling wildly and stood just as a security guard rushed in to tackle him. The elf man whimpered as he was dragged out.
“This is a bank, Jesus,” she whispered.
Submission 4
"Once upon a time,
There lived a vain elf who was obsessed with their appearance and always looking perfect. One day, the elf saw an advertisement for a new brand of hair dye that was said to be infused with unicorn hair, giving the dye magical properties that would keep your hair shiny and luxurious for years. Determined to have this dye, the elf decided to take a trip to the bank to withdraw some money, as the dye was quite expensive, priced at a whopping three-thousand dollars. While on their way to the bank, the elf was stopped in their tracks by a beggar, who latched onto their shirt and pleaded for spare change.
Scoffing, the elf turned their nose up haughtily at the beggar and declared, ""Filthy peasant, keep your disgusting hands off of me. I have no time nor money for lowlifes like you. Simply gazing upon your hideous form brings me pain.""
Angered at their cruel words, the beggar stood up and removed their cloak, revealing their true form. They were in fact a powerful wizard, and this had been a test of character for the elf, which they failed. Pulling out a needle filled with a potion, the wizard plunged it into the elf into a pig,
And from that day forward, the elf was cursed to live as a hideous pig.
The end"
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You can submit whatever you have. You will only lose 5 points for not reaching the word limit. Just make sure the necessary words are included early. You can vote for this round. Make sure to read the instructions.I barely made it to the 100th word
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Reading my story again, I truely have no clue what I have written lol
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Results are here.
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First let's see who submitted what.
Chococo | 1 | “It’s so disgusting here! How much perfume did you use?” Completely undazed Stannie hid in her friend’s bag. It was a terrible idea to transform herself into a cat. Chomi's potion worked wonders with a little bit of help of Coco's spell. She became much more sensitive to smells… and energies around her. Her fur standing out in spikes. Voices inside her warning they shouldn’t be doing this. Her black-colored tail slightly protrudes outside, pushing herself upwards on her little toes to inhale a refreshing breath from outside. Wait, did she just spot a needle from the corners of her eyes? Here in the bank? Nara stops her in her steps abruptly. Her lips curved upwards into a tiny smile, her wavy orange-colored hair hiding a secret behind her shoulder. A hand subtly covering her bag. An elf who worked behind the counter doesn’t even tilt their eyes upwards. The girl clears her throat—and then again, “Can I have your attention?” Dark eyes meet the blue ones. And soft-spoken Nara begins, “I would like to check in my bank account." But the bank teller appeared to be completely uninterested, even unenthusiastic, "And who you might be?" "Akidoki." |
Chomiczewska | 2 | It was a peaceful afternoon in the Elf's village. Elves were ending their daily duties and preparing to go home after a long day of work, but suddenly villagers could feel a stronger wind in their hair. It quickly started picking up the pace and before long it there was a strong gale dancing around. Scared elves run indoors to hide, but as they were entering the huts they could smell a disgusting stench coming from behind them - when they looked through the windows outside they noticed a figure in the strong wind. They weren't able to tell how exactly it looked like, because all the stuff wind picked up from te ground, but it was massive. Big and tall and looked like it was holding a giant needle. After standing in place for so long it suddenly jumped and landed right next to the bank. It hammered the needle like object into the roof and sliced the building in half by moving it. All the village's gold fell out of the now ruined bank and the creature quickly picked it all up and run off into the distance - taking the treasure and wind with it. |
Lurkette | 3 | “I look disgusting,” she thought to herself as she caught sight of her reflection in the mirrored glass of the door. She sighed and looked down as she continued waiting her turn in line for the bank. She tapped her fingers against her wallet when she felt a sharp sting. She pulled her finger up, a drop of blood oozing out. “Gotcha.” Next to her, somehow without her noticing, was a man dressed like an elf. Or at least she thought it was an elf. He had prosthetic ear tips on and a cheap wig that gave him hair like what she assumed was supposed to be Legolas’s. He held up a needle to his grin. “Who… what the hell?” “Now you’re mine, forever!” he yelled. She looked around to see if anyone would try to intervene, but no one was willing to forgo their place in line so they all casually looked away. She became flustered as he grinned further. “I have claimed your blood as my own, and now you shall be my eternal paramour! For I am the needle elf!” he declared, screaming once more. She became flustered, “This is a bank.” He began cackling wildly and stood just as a security guard rushed in to tackle him. The elf man whimpered as he was dragged out. “This is a bank, Jesus,” she whispered. |
chiharu | 4 | Once upon a time, There lived a vain elf who was obsessed with their appearance and always looking perfect. One day, the elf saw an advertisement for a new brand of hair dye that was said to be infused with unicorn hair, giving the dye magical properties that would keep your hair shiny and luxurious for years. Determined to have this dye, the elf decided to take a trip to the bank to withdraw some money, as the dye was quite expensive, priced at a whopping three-thousand dollars. While on their way to the bank, the elf was stopped in their tracks by a beggar, who latched onto their shirt and pleaded for spare change. Scoffing, the elf turned their nose up haughtily at the beggar and declared, "Filthy peasant, keep your disgusting hands off of me. I have no time nor money for lowlifes like you. Simply gazing upon your hideous form brings me pain." Angered at their cruel words, the beggar stood up and removed their cloak, revealing their true form. They were in fact a powerful wizard, and this had been a test of character for the elf, which they failed. Pulling out a needle filled with a potion, the wizard plunged it into the elf into a pig, And from that day forward, the elf was cursed to live as a hideous pig. The end |
And the scores are as follows.
My Favourite story was submission 3. It was very out of the box and still pretty coherant. I had fun reading it!
User | Submission 1 | Submission 2 | Submission 3 | Submission 4 |
Lurkette | 2 | 1 | 0 | 3 |
Chococo | 0 | 2 | 1 | 3 |
Chiharu | 2 | 1 | 3 | 0 |
Bchip | 1 | 0 | 2 | 3 |
Chomiczewska | 1 | 0 | 3 | 2 |
Bonus Aki Points | | | 2 | |
Total | 6 | 4 | 11 | 11 |
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Round 2
Include these words in your Story.
Snow Unrest Belly Import Spicy
You cannot change the tense or form of the word.
Your word limit is 150 to 250 words. If your story is below or above the limit you will lose 5 points from your score for the round.
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forms.gle
Include these words in your Story.
Snow Unrest Belly Import Spicy
You cannot change the tense or form of the word.
Your word limit is 150 to 250 words. If your story is below or above the limit you will lose 5 points from your score for the round.
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Submit your story via the form below.
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Submission Form Round 2
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I start out with very large ambitions and then remember it's only 250 words
At least I make myself laugh.
At least I make myself laugh.
Chococo
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I am here to have fun only. It is nice to have a break from an actual, serious writing.
I am here to have fun only. It is nice to have a break from an actual, serious writing.
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Well The moment you ended the story and it has 252 words and it's 0:04 dfghj
The moment you ended the story and it has 252 words and it's 0:04 dfghj